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“Careful...” he comments as she idly tosses the object into the air. Up and down up and down like some game that has just been invented. He flinches as the object fly’s higher and higher, never once taking his eyes off the prized possession. A slip of the wrist, a slight gasp from the boy, a soft shatter as glass meets the floor.  The girl walks away. “It’s not a toy..,” whispers the boy to nobody. Slowly he picks up the shattered pieces of his heart.
** i had to write a short story for english in 50 to 75 words of cours ei went over the limit and went to 80 =O eep well we can only hope my english teacher wont stab me in the eye anways this story is inspired by recent events that have been happening to me please i know that this is far from perfect (ehehe and my grammer probably horrible) so yeaaaah please read and i hope you enjoy remeber im no writer and so now onto my short lil story...thing....=]**
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Eskimocougar Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2006   Photographer
Daaaaaaaaaaaaarling

I love you!
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Tiggstar Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That was quite beautiful! very awesomely done!!! mine is so unseriously unbeautiful compared to yours O_o lol
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:icondemolitianlovers:
demolitianlovers Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2006
ish i bets not! did you draw a pic for yours!!??? i did its pretty laaaaaaaammmmeee
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Tiggstar Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
mine would give away the story if i did oh ho!! youll just have to see it tomorrow!!
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:icondemolitianlovers:
demolitianlovers Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2006
anooooessssss i wanna know what it is! =[ pwes?
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:icontiggstar:
Tiggstar Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
its got something to do with lenses and focusing
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demolitianlovers Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2006
LIKE GLASSES!!!??? *tehehee*rember the circle? OMG you wear glasses *push* <33
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:icontiggstar:
Tiggstar Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ahhhh its grade 7 and 8 all over again! XD
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demolitianlovers Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2006
oh noes lol btw i read your lovely poem its sooOOo good you should post it! =]
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xSoulOnFire88x Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2006
i really like this!
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